Origin Scroll
Gelesen von Richard S. Tuttle
Richard S. Tuttle
Origin Scroll is the first volume of the Targa Trilogy and the cornerstone of the epic fantasy Alcea Collection which spans sixteen volumes in three series.
Alexander Tork is an apprentice lumberman, a fifteen year old who is forced to take the lead when his village is attacked by a pack of vicious beasts. But darker things lurk in the lands of Targa and Cordonia, an evil questing for an artifact that will shake the very Universe. Alex, and two more unknown youths, Oscar and Jenneva, are the only ones who can prevent the end of their universe... they just don't know it yet.
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Chapter 2 - The Village Leader
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Read by Richard S. Tuttle
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Read by Richard S. Tuttle
Read by Richard S. Tuttle
Read by Richard S. Tuttle
Read by Richard S. Tuttle
Read by Richard S. Tuttle
Read by Richard S. Tuttle
Bewertungen
decent listen
smallsteve
This is a decent story that paves the way for the follow-on books in the series. It has all the usual components of a story about magic and is decently written. There are one or two scenes where the intensity is completely skipped and the deed is done with only a few words. This comes across as a bit odd, but doesn’t proliferate through the story and so it’s not a major issue. Can you relation is not that bad as some would have you believe. The author does a decent enough job so as not to detract from the story. I have certainly heard a lot worse! Considering I am about to download the second book in the series, it is testament to the fact that it Is at least worth a listen and see if you like it.
Wight
Clearly the author has a good imagination and the story is probably a good one. unfortunately it is filled with below average writing. The sentences are overwhelmingly short and clipped. character development is very limited. the characters run into difficulty and get out immediately. There is little no suspense and so almost no excitement. Finally the reader switches between monotone and trying to add inflection. His breathing and voice throughout had me thinking he must have a cold. Still I listened to it all. In the end its a good story that should be much better.
Most excellent!
Karebil
Great combination of story and narration. Clean enough for young adults Ie. 14-15 and older. Exciting and intriguing enough for adults to enjoy. There is a lot of bloody violence which may be off putting for some youth and their parents. Suggest a parent listen first if there are any concerns along this line.
really good
antony lubbe
The reader was excellent, the story was fast paced and interesting. A magician adventure story. The author attached some piano parts between some paragraphs and chapters which subtracted from the tale. The future lister should skip the last half of each chapter because it is a repeat of the chapter and an advertisement.
Shadowstorm
the author has a habit of skipping far too many details of a scene for the audience to completely visualize what is going on... and often things are cut short far too quickly for the suspense of a tough situation... all that said it is an interesting story to listen to.
By: Gary Goodman
This is the second fantasy podcast book I have subscribed to and the only one I finished. The story was very enjoyable and had a good balance of character development and action. I was truly surprised by a twist near the end of the story with Jeneeva. You really had ...
By: Angela
I just wanted to let you know that I think your story is fantastic! It is rare when not only is the story good, but the characters are lovable, the narration is pleasant, the music is beautfiul...the whole production was completely wonderful and I cannot wait to listen to book ...
Brett Miller
I found this fascinating. The character growth, though somewhat contrived and at times unbelievable, still felt oddly natural. It is obvious that the author read Raymond E. Feist beforehand, and borrowed from his ideas, but that felt more like an "honoring" than a "pirating".